
6/27/2011 c1 LilMaria
This was really sweet, great job!
South wales? I envy you, my friend...I'm stuck in south US...
But really good job! Loved it:)
Peace and Love
~marie
This was really sweet, great job!
South wales? I envy you, my friend...I'm stuck in south US...
But really good job! Loved it:)
Peace and Love
~marie
1/28/2006 c1
187Andaren
Very beutiful :) I love the use of rhyme and assonance - it worked so well and the poem flowed so easily :)
A very professional piece of writing, I've missed reading your work.
Blessed Be,
Andaren x

Very beutiful :) I love the use of rhyme and assonance - it worked so well and the poem flowed so easily :)
A very professional piece of writing, I've missed reading your work.
Blessed Be,
Andaren x
11/16/2005 c1
13Ileandra Young
Well there we have it. Plain enough from seeing you two together that you dote on each other. This is a beautiful piece of work honey. Likie much.

Well there we have it. Plain enough from seeing you two together that you dote on each other. This is a beautiful piece of work honey. Likie much.
10/10/2005 c1
74laughter at the funeral
i really like the rhythm to this...like for a romantic play or something...although some lines ar quite cliched...but well written none the less...
truly yours...

i really like the rhythm to this...like for a romantic play or something...although some lines ar quite cliched...but well written none the less...
truly yours...