for Daddy's All Mine Now11/2/2005 c1 angelinastefany
u know i love this one it's awsome see i need to learn to put more details in mine like in yours *wondering* help a sista out
u know i love this one it's awsome see i need to learn to put more details in mine like in yours *wondering* help a sista out
8/8/2005 c1 
18lshta
this is definately something all its own. i don't really think that there is one sure way to review this as there are many view points that could be taken on this..but i for one greatly enjoyed this poem as it showed jealousy, love, anger, and was able to twist it all together flawlessly, great job
18lshtathis is definately something all its own. i don't really think that there is one sure way to review this as there are many view points that could be taken on this..but i for one greatly enjoyed this poem as it showed jealousy, love, anger, and was able to twist it all together flawlessly, great job
8/1/2005 c1 Kristen
Wow..this is twisted but amazing. Nice word usage. Great Job. ^_^
Wow..this is twisted but amazing. Nice word usage. Great Job. ^_^
7/23/2005 c1 174marshbar960
i am going to assume how you and your dad are and have always been very close and yet you feel that his new wife is somehow coming between you two. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
174marshbar960i am going to assume how you and your dad are and have always been very close and yet you feel that his new wife is somehow coming between you two. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!