
2/13/2023 c28
21RainbowPearls
I literally read this novel this in one day.
One night and one day.
The most awesome and wonderful novel I've ever read. I don't regret at all staying up night all along reading it.
The thrill, the amusement, the laughter, the happiness, the joy, the so so much relatable, feltable anxiety, the tears, the happiness, the victory, the confidence ,the heaviness and shaking everything was so so much worth reading!
Totally loved Taylor and James here. Plus Josh was also a wonderful character. I laughed so much at his jokes! XD
Seriously I loveddddd it to no ends.

I literally read this novel this in one day.
One night and one day.
The most awesome and wonderful novel I've ever read. I don't regret at all staying up night all along reading it.
The thrill, the amusement, the laughter, the happiness, the joy, the so so much relatable, feltable anxiety, the tears, the happiness, the victory, the confidence ,the heaviness and shaking everything was so so much worth reading!
Totally loved Taylor and James here. Plus Josh was also a wonderful character. I laughed so much at his jokes! XD
Seriously I loveddddd it to no ends.
11/22/2022 c28
3Colie Rae
I read this story years ago when you first posted and just reread it this week. And I still loved it! I thought it was really cute and I liked that the characters did believable, regrettable things. It's interesting to me the balance of what you chose to describe in detail vs summarize (ie. some of the basketball game was play by play for the first three minutes and then skip to the end of the game). I thought it worked really well to stay interesting and I think that's a hard balance to find. The only characters I found a bit hard to understand or accept were Taylor's parents. The other characters were fun and even though there were so many they did have their own personalities. Props to you for writing a story that stood the test of time for me personally. I'm really grateful you shared it here.

I read this story years ago when you first posted and just reread it this week. And I still loved it! I thought it was really cute and I liked that the characters did believable, regrettable things. It's interesting to me the balance of what you chose to describe in detail vs summarize (ie. some of the basketball game was play by play for the first three minutes and then skip to the end of the game). I thought it worked really well to stay interesting and I think that's a hard balance to find. The only characters I found a bit hard to understand or accept were Taylor's parents. The other characters were fun and even though there were so many they did have their own personalities. Props to you for writing a story that stood the test of time for me personally. I'm really grateful you shared it here.
8/1/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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9/20/2020 c27 Otakuami
I loved this story her friends were the best
I loved this story her friends were the best
4/17/2019 c28 ShadowPhoenixxx
OMG! It was such an amazing story. I could practically feel the thrill and excitement of it pumping through my veins. I can't really say much except that your story left my speechless. One of the best stories I've ever read. Hope you'll continue writing such amazing stories.
P.S. Did you ever think about publishing the story?
OMG! It was such an amazing story. I could practically feel the thrill and excitement of it pumping through my veins. I can't really say much except that your story left my speechless. One of the best stories I've ever read. Hope you'll continue writing such amazing stories.
P.S. Did you ever think about publishing the story?
3/19/2019 c28 Smile
It is really beautiful, Happy that you put it back on :-)
Hope to see more of your works :-)
It is really beautiful, Happy that you put it back on :-)
Hope to see more of your works :-)
1/1/2019 c28 Lily
THIS STORY WAS SO F***ING GOOD! I COULD ACTUALLY FEEL THE PAIN AND HEARTACHE! ONCE I GOT TO CHAPTER THREE I COULD NOT AND WOULD NOT STOP READING. I know that sounds dramatic and slightly odd, but that is what happens with true talent. The relationship of James and Taylor was perfect. Perfect. Everything about it made ME squeal, just like Josh. Loved him by the way. You are such an amazing writer. I really hope you continue to write short stories and share your ideas. They made me smile :)
THIS STORY WAS SO F***ING GOOD! I COULD ACTUALLY FEEL THE PAIN AND HEARTACHE! ONCE I GOT TO CHAPTER THREE I COULD NOT AND WOULD NOT STOP READING. I know that sounds dramatic and slightly odd, but that is what happens with true talent. The relationship of James and Taylor was perfect. Perfect. Everything about it made ME squeal, just like Josh. Loved him by the way. You are such an amazing writer. I really hope you continue to write short stories and share your ideas. They made me smile :)
11/30/2018 c1
3I'll Break Your Heart
I love this story! I remember reading it when I was in high school. It’s fantastic. I really hope you still write! (-:

I love this story! I remember reading it when I was in high school. It’s fantastic. I really hope you still write! (-:
6/20/2018 c28
75AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful story! I'm usually not a fan of sports books, but I loved this one!

Wonderful story! I'm usually not a fan of sports books, but I loved this one!
6/15/2018 c28 Guest
This certainly and most definitely has to be the best story I have ever read. I loved it to bits! Taylor and James are the cutest for sure! Loved the drama, romance, and adrenaline. You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
This certainly and most definitely has to be the best story I have ever read. I loved it to bits! Taylor and James are the cutest for sure! Loved the drama, romance, and adrenaline. You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
2/27/2018 c28 Guest
It would be amazing if you write a sequel
It would be amazing if you write a sequel
12/31/2017 c28 Felix
Need more James being cute with Taylor
Need more James being cute with Taylor
12/30/2017 c28 Felix
Loved this story. Just one thing why did he give in to Mercedes when he told Taylor his feelings and how he can’t stop thinking about.
Also would love an epilogue or a one shot into how they are as proper boyfriend and girlfriend.
Loved this story. Just one thing why did he give in to Mercedes when he told Taylor his feelings and how he can’t stop thinking about.
Also would love an epilogue or a one shot into how they are as proper boyfriend and girlfriend.