for All My Loves Were Hopeless Dreams2/5/2006 c1 Broken Frailty
I really liked your imagery of the charcoal dove...that's really interesting, and I've definately never thought of anything like that before! I also quite enjoyed your last 4 lines...when I read them, I whispered them in my head...Very effective! Gorgeous work; Keep it up!
I really liked your imagery of the charcoal dove...that's really interesting, and I've definately never thought of anything like that before! I also quite enjoyed your last 4 lines...when I read them, I whispered them in my head...Very effective! Gorgeous work; Keep it up!
7/23/2005 c1 
12Chell-o Bodello
Lovely. And beautifully written. I especially like the fact that you added a whispered part. This song would be SO cool put to music.
~ Lunchi
12Chell-o BodelloLovely. And beautifully written. I especially like the fact that you added a whispered part. This song would be SO cool put to music.
~ Lunchi