for Lament8/17/2005 c1 
11darkofnight
Wow. This was intense. Very deep. I'm not quite sure why, but this poem really struck home with me. Absolutely beautiful.
11darkofnightWow. This was intense. Very deep. I'm not quite sure why, but this poem really struck home with me. Absolutely beautiful.
7/27/2005 c1 124in theory
Lovely, the archaic language catered to its steady rhythm and dynamic message very well. I wonder who died..
124in theoryLovely, the archaic language catered to its steady rhythm and dynamic message very well. I wonder who died..
7/23/2005 c1 4SuicideTrees
I like that. It reminds me of how a person can be happy and not know what's really going on around them. Nice.
4SuicideTreesI like that. It reminds me of how a person can be happy and not know what's really going on around them. Nice.
7/23/2005 c1 6A different time
Oh, wow. That was really beautiful. I really liked your use of repetition.
Thanks for the review, by the way!
6A different timeOh, wow. That was really beautiful. I really liked your use of repetition.
Thanks for the review, by the way!