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10/2/2005 c1 17dancingintheshadows
This poem is very good and I love your wording.

~dancingintheshadows
8/1/2005 c1 19she wants revenge
Thanks so much for your reviews! I signed onto my e-mail and I was so elated to see such great feedback! lol But besides that, I really like your poetry as I've read it thus far. I'll be sure to put you up as a shoutout, and maybe I'll give you an extended review in my bio page. Thanks so much!
7/31/2005 c1 59Unholy Haven
You've managed to express anger in a soft way here, and it's very refreshing. I like this poem.
7/25/2005 c1 174marshbar960
i can sense your anger and frustration here:

i am going to assume that for the longest time you have worn your innocence around your neck. but then suddently, it was stolen away from you: by some one who was angelic on the outside and demonic on the inside. as a result, you tend to view the world in black and white, if you know what i mean.

just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. thanks also for your reviews. and remember, God loves you and so do I!

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