for Someone at the Door3/8/2007 c1 
1Jaeiyola
Wow, that is amazing. The last sentence was just perfect, it sums up everything wonderfully, but yet, leaving me feel like there will be more.
1JaeiyolaWow, that is amazing. The last sentence was just perfect, it sums up everything wonderfully, but yet, leaving me feel like there will be more.
8/13/2005 c1 21as beauty dies
thats kinda scary. very smart and wonderfully written, the ending was nicely done though it seemed a bit rushed for an other wised well paced story. the writing is just amazing and really pushes off into a different direction then others. well done.
~* as beauty dies
21as beauty diesthats kinda scary. very smart and wonderfully written, the ending was nicely done though it seemed a bit rushed for an other wised well paced story. the writing is just amazing and really pushes off into a different direction then others. well done.
~* as beauty dies
7/26/2005 c1 Gregtoo lazy to sign in
And while my enthusiasm doesnt quite match those that came before me, I also liked this peice a lot
I like that its not your usual, that you're branching out into other genres.
I cant explain why, but the only line that felt jarring was this one "And, as Ellie seeks out Martin’s defense, the doorbell rings." Every other line ties in to an emotional feel, but that line feels absent, barren, missing a vital connection to the peice
maybe its just me, but overall another excellent bit
And while my enthusiasm doesnt quite match those that came before me, I also liked this peice a lot
I like that its not your usual, that you're branching out into other genres.
I cant explain why, but the only line that felt jarring was this one "And, as Ellie seeks out Martin’s defense, the doorbell rings." Every other line ties in to an emotional feel, but that line feels absent, barren, missing a vital connection to the peice
maybe its just me, but overall another excellent bit
7/24/2005 c1 8Katrina G. Cortious
I love you, you know that? Let's elope and get married.
And if -that- hadn't scared you off yet, I suppose I should write my review now.
I love your stories! It's absolutely wonderful! Yes, I had you on my Author's Alert. Well, I couldn't resist can I? Horrors, thrillers, are always a definate plus.
Keep writing!
8Katrina G. CortiousI love you, you know that? Let's elope and get married.
And if -that- hadn't scared you off yet, I suppose I should write my review now.
I love your stories! It's absolutely wonderful! Yes, I had you on my Author's Alert. Well, I couldn't resist can I? Horrors, thrillers, are always a definate plus.
Keep writing!