for Secrets12/14/2005 c1 
18Plinky
Nice idea. Lovely characterisation. You manage to convey a character really quickly.
This was a really good length - it didn't drag at all, but was long enough to explain properly.
Lovely piece of writing! Made me shiver. :P
18PlinkyNice idea. Lovely characterisation. You manage to convey a character really quickly.
This was a really good length - it didn't drag at all, but was long enough to explain properly.
Lovely piece of writing! Made me shiver. :P
10/18/2005 c1 XxDragon Princess NikkixX
A very interesting start. This definitly has a lot of potential. I hope you keep up all the great work. Thanks so much for your review! *hugz*
A very interesting start. This definitly has a lot of potential. I hope you keep up all the great work. Thanks so much for your review! *hugz*