for Waiting8/8/2005 c1 
18lshta
the way you styled the poem made it easier to read and had more meaning as if it were two people speaking as one. great job!
18lshtathe way you styled the poem made it easier to read and had more meaning as if it were two people speaking as one. great job!
7/25/2005 c1 5Crimson Grave
wow you can really feel the pain and emotion you expienced through this poem. It creates such strong imitry and conveys such a strong emotins. Keep Writting!_!
5Crimson Gravewow you can really feel the pain and emotion you expienced through this poem. It creates such strong imitry and conveys such a strong emotins. Keep Writting!_!
7/25/2005 c1 13i-wish-it-was-make-believe
sighs well i know all about watching some one walk away and never returning. well written, very emotional.
13i-wish-it-was-make-believesighs well i know all about watching some one walk away and never returning. well written, very emotional.