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1/29/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Good poem, nice rhyme
9/1/2005 c1 28Tk.T
Were you striving for irony here? Anyway, this was a good poem. I liked: "I notice a helping hand, but it lacks fingers" Very interesting indeed.

Happy writing!

Tk.T~
7/26/2005 c1 ing
I love how took something generally associated with help and made it something more, shall we say, negative. Wonderful idea with a rhyme that leads the poem on.

~ing~
7/25/2005 c1 11demon in disguise
It's quite short, but it tells a lot. The rhyming is good too... So great job. :)

[Please review some of my work if you have the time... Thanks. :D]

~Struggling-soul
7/25/2005 c1 64atalantea
I like it. :D Short, straight and so there. :D
7/25/2005 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
simple but sweet!

Kira

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