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1/3/2007 c1 14CK Shorty
Amazing. Found this one-shot from the sKow Awards site. Short, but it said alot. Good job.
12/29/2006 c1 12elisefey
I have so totally been there. It's both heartbreaking and satisfying. Good job.
12/29/2006 c1 4Walking Catastrophe
Congrats! This story has been nominated to win the One Shot section of our awards site.

-Cherry
11/18/2006 c1 1goodbyemylover
i've read this a few times, and everytime i read it, i think of The Notebook. you know, the scene where Noah's in the car and Ally tells him to leave but then feels bad and chases after him. It doesn't really have anything to do with this, but that's what it reminds me of. Also, i can really feel the emotions in this story, it's really good.
11/14/2006 c1 xxlover
aw..
11/10/2006 c1 luv me like no other
i had this happen to me once. guys, eh. lol. I realy like this story, and it makes females all over feel proud that she said no to him.
10/4/2006 c1 Aya
This probably won't make sense to you, but...

Thank you.
6/1/2006 c1 3Daydream Nation
ouch. so depressing. =P ^_^ Awesome story.
2/5/2006 c1 Guest
i love this story... and i think that if maybe you elaborated on this then it wouldnt be as good.. this should win an award or something for best one shot =) anyways i love the way you write hope you write more stories
2/4/2006 c1 Hollyboneli
I like this... :D I remember this guy whenever I read this...
1/12/2006 c1 SKoW Awards
Hello!This is Linda from Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards. This message is to inform you that your story, Better Off Without You, has been nominated for the Best One-shot award by an anonymous source. Keep up the fantastic work!Sincerely,LindaSKoW Romance Awardshttp:/w.freewebs.com/skow
8/14/2005 c1 SamiKismet
Yep, itz me :) Finally reading your story and not dissapointed one bit! I liked how each line was different yet somehow closely related. It was a smooth transition and very effective! Loved your fiction! :D
8/2/2005 c1 10Ridley Jack
Oh, poor girl! I can't say I understand completely, but I do. I do, though, completely understand why you don't want to go farther with this story. Part of it's allure is the mystery of what happened. (This said by the writer who's only ever posted-hell, finished!-one shots.)I also like how there aren't really any paragraphs, just lines. Gives it more feeling.Well, this review is already taking up a lot of space, so I shall end it here, much to your vast dissapointment, I know, :PTootle Pip dahling!
7/29/2005 c1 fromTHEcold
Alright (oh, loved this by the way ;-p) How about this: There's a girl that has been scorned by love too many times to count-she's given up all hope on the opposite sex. (And why not? Men are just bastards sometimes...) So, she's given up hope on ever finding, you know, Mr. Right (or even Mr. Right Now) and then the unthinkable happens-her family (happily married folk) decide to find him for her. That would be really odd, actually. You could have the mother and dad-even little Timmy (ignore name-I'm really hyped up on caffeine) are interviewing guys for the lead. And then they find him...only...she does want him. Okay, this plot suddenly sounds really odd...I need to lay off the coffee. I don't know, I was just trying to give an idea to one of the best writers on this site. ^_^ You could always try to revamp your first story, obsessivecompulsivedisorder. :-) Or the one that you finished...or anything, really. I love your work, so whatever you choose to do will rock! (My sis (Hopeless Romance Addict) is the one that turned me onto you. So...yeah, you're a family hit!) Good luck to whatever you do!
7/27/2005 c1 Hopeless Romance Addict
Hi, I've been reading your stories for a really long time (way back when you were obessivecompulivedisorder) and I love the way you write. I loved this too, especially because the girl stood up to him (which seemed like a first). Oh, and you've asked for ideas, right? Well, I personally would love to see your take on one of the cliched romances that are on here. I know that sounds weird, but here me out: you're an excellent writer and would give a wonderful (and emotional) take on one of the stories and I think you deserve a lot more reviews than you've been getting. ^_^ You should be up in the thousands-that's my opinion, anyway. Right...so take a cliche (anyone you want) and get a feel for it, and then write it. You would do wonderful, I know that to be true. However, even if you don't, you will always have a loyal reader in me. ^_~
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