7/27/2005 c1 6Nickety
I liked it unexplained. The dynamics are just as, if not more, powerful when ambiguous.
I liked it unexplained. The dynamics are just as, if not more, powerful when ambiguous.
7/26/2005 c1 LcT514
what the-! that's it ? ahh ! i thought it was good, and i think it would be realy appreciated if you can continue this story as to what had happened prior to leading to this event?
what the-! that's it ? ahh ! i thought it was good, and i think it would be realy appreciated if you can continue this story as to what had happened prior to leading to this event?
7/26/2005 c1 final flourish
You have, defintely, a wonderful style of your own, and it was refreshing to read this story. But so much of it is left unsaid that it leaves a reader [ aka me XP ] wanting more. . So, yes, yes? Maybe? Write more? But - as it is now, its well done.
You have, defintely, a wonderful style of your own, and it was refreshing to read this story. But so much of it is left unsaid that it leaves a reader [ aka me XP ] wanting more. . So, yes, yes? Maybe? Write more? But - as it is now, its well done.