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1/30/2011 c1 6Hamlet Survives
its an ok poem, the halls kind of remind me of schools

it sounds like a nice start to a story however i dont feel like it comes 'full circle'
11/26/2005 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
Good. I like it.
10/7/2005 c1 116loversdream17
Good job. Sorry it has been a while since i have reviewed any of your work. Well i like it but the ending leaves me wondering and thinking something more is suppose to come but all in all it has good rythming whihc isn't forced, good rythym . Love always and forever mandi
9/11/2005 c1 38CarpeDiem28
Simple but powerful. Excellent. This was a great one.
7/28/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
sad and well done
7/26/2005 c1 858Anna178
Wow, been a while since I read any of your work I think, or has it just been a while since you posted? But nevertheless this is amazing. Good ryhme, but dont get TOO caught up in that. The flow is brilliant though, and it gets the point across.

7/26/2005 c1 s
aw, so sad.

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