for Melancholy1/30/2011 c1 
6Hamlet Survives
its an ok poem, the halls kind of remind me of schools
it sounds like a nice start to a story however i dont feel like it comes 'full circle'
6Hamlet Survivesits an ok poem, the halls kind of remind me of schools
it sounds like a nice start to a story however i dont feel like it comes 'full circle'
10/7/2005 c1 116loversdream17
Good job. Sorry it has been a while since i have reviewed any of your work. Well i like it but the ending leaves me wondering and thinking something more is suppose to come but all in all it has good rythming whihc isn't forced, good rythym . Love always and forever mandi
116loversdream17Good job. Sorry it has been a while since i have reviewed any of your work. Well i like it but the ending leaves me wondering and thinking something more is suppose to come but all in all it has good rythming whihc isn't forced, good rythym . Love always and forever mandi
7/26/2005 c1 858Anna178
Wow, been a while since I read any of your work I think, or has it just been a while since you posted? But nevertheless this is amazing. Good ryhme, but dont get TOO caught up in that. The flow is brilliant though, and it gets the point across.
ANNA
858Anna178Wow, been a while since I read any of your work I think, or has it just been a while since you posted? But nevertheless this is amazing. Good ryhme, but dont get TOO caught up in that. The flow is brilliant though, and it gets the point across.
ANNA
7/26/2005 c1 s
aw, so sad.
aw, so sad.