for Heaven12/14/2005 c1 
18Plinky
Nice twist! I really didn't expect the whole 'cat' thing at all. I was like 'oh!'. nicely done.
A restaurant called the frog? Lol. That made me smile.
The end was a little confusing, but lovely, and it didn't take me long to work it out.
It felt a little repetitive by the third chase, but I understand the need to emphasise that her life is like that.
All round nicely written piece, lovely idea. Keep writing and thanks for the review!
18PlinkyNice twist! I really didn't expect the whole 'cat' thing at all. I was like 'oh!'. nicely done.
A restaurant called the frog? Lol. That made me smile.
The end was a little confusing, but lovely, and it didn't take me long to work it out.
It felt a little repetitive by the third chase, but I understand the need to emphasise that her life is like that.
All round nicely written piece, lovely idea. Keep writing and thanks for the review!