for Shall I tell you?5/18/2006 c1 
1Van Jones
Quite simply I like it. It has a gentle flow and has a pendulum rythym to it, moving it on steadily. Nice one:)
1Van JonesQuite simply I like it. It has a gentle flow and has a pendulum rythym to it, moving it on steadily. Nice one:)
7/26/2005 c1 3LadyBugLuck
I like it! wish i could write poetry _ Its simple, but i like the way you laid it out and stuff. Yay poems! :P
3LadyBugLuckI like it! wish i could write poetry _ Its simple, but i like the way you laid it out and stuff. Yay poems! :P
7/26/2005 c1 4Mage Dudette
oo, i like how the lines all start the same, except the last one, makes it stand out more, which i think works well. i also luv the imagery used here, and the story of the angels u can sense hidden here. i think it rocks! =P but then, i told u that already!
4Mage Dudetteoo, i like how the lines all start the same, except the last one, makes it stand out more, which i think works well. i also luv the imagery used here, and the story of the angels u can sense hidden here. i think it rocks! =P but then, i told u that already!