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9/2/2012 c1 2ohsocyanide
There's something that seems very broken throughout this, and I like that. Your sentences are short and choppy, and while I usually nitpick at that, I feel as though this works very well for the style you have going here.

You use a lot of metaphors and description, and you use them well. This was an interesting piece, albeit a confusing one, but I did enjoy it overall. :)

ohsocyanide.
7/14/2009 c1 holly is fainting
I can understand why this has no reviews. Most people on FP are young girls seeking some light, fluffy romance. THIS is not light or fluffy. It IS, however, brilliant. Very well-written. It's more like poetry than prose. I love that you were willing to do something different, something outside-the-box. I think you succeeded.

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