for The Right of Adel Mar1/31/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
it's interesting, but I have no idea what the Adel Mar is. maybe an author note should be in place. it's nicely done even if i can't get the whole meaning of it.
it's interesting, but I have no idea what the Adel Mar is. maybe an author note should be in place. it's nicely done even if i can't get the whole meaning of it.
8/21/2005 c1 
42Emmytastic gal
hey, this is awesome. I don't know how you pick the perfect words... its a gift lol. Anyhoo, its a great poem... :( i've been drowning in stupid writer's block. can't seem to write anything worth posting.
keep it up-Em
42Emmytastic galhey, this is awesome. I don't know how you pick the perfect words... its a gift lol. Anyhoo, its a great poem... :( i've been drowning in stupid writer's block. can't seem to write anything worth posting.
keep it up-Em
7/29/2005 c1 50C Robertson
This is very good. Fab word choice, makes ya yearn for more and want to read on, very refreshing from the drone of the everyday modern "yo what up?" shite. Very enjoyable, I love it. a Favorite of mine most definet.
50C RobertsonThis is very good. Fab word choice, makes ya yearn for more and want to read on, very refreshing from the drone of the everyday modern "yo what up?" shite. Very enjoyable, I love it. a Favorite of mine most definet.
7/28/2005 c1 118origamikitty
Hmm.. I'm not remembering this harsh review you speak of. But I don't doubt it. Sometimes I blow of steam by coming on FP and telling people when I really don't like their work.
But this? This I like! Nice rhythm. And I love the playe with "telltale light" and "tell-all right". That part might be my favorite. Nice word-choice. You're using less common-day words which makes it interesting. I like, I like. You seem nice =)
118origamikittyHmm.. I'm not remembering this harsh review you speak of. But I don't doubt it. Sometimes I blow of steam by coming on FP and telling people when I really don't like their work.
But this? This I like! Nice rhythm. And I love the playe with "telltale light" and "tell-all right". That part might be my favorite. Nice word-choice. You're using less common-day words which makes it interesting. I like, I like. You seem nice =)