for Amidst the Void7/30/2005 c1 
6Nobody-n-Particular
I think the second line should be worded this way:
"But feel the sweet of your touch"
That is how I originally read it and find it more enticing than the other.
Lovely poem.
6Nobody-n-ParticularI think the second line should be worded this way:
"But feel the sweet of your touch"
That is how I originally read it and find it more enticing than the other.
Lovely poem.
7/29/2005 c1 9
oh cool.
oh cool.