Reviews: Moonlight Haiku

8/23/2005 c1

1Clodhopper
this was sweet, but not my favorite. you may wanna caps the "I" in "i know you won't stay". please dont get me wrong, it isnt my favorite by no fault of your writing. just because this isnt my thing i guess

~Mack

8/10/2005 c1

2chirrup
Thanks for your review. :) It really brightened my day.

I loved this piece, especially the "eyes full of tears, fringed with star-dust". That was the prettiest line. You really have talent.

Cheers!

8/2/2005 c1 Quelleruth
Well-written haiku... very sad.

7/31/2005 c1

20Infection
wow, this was a interesting haiku, i loved it.

7/31/2005 c1

95Ellin Louise
I love the imagery in this poem; dreamy moonlight, stars wink, sand-filled footprints... very well writen.

7/30/2005 c1

6Nobody-n-Particular
I love the dusty detail like "star-dust" and "sand-filled"

7/30/2005 c1

57Jessicka-scab
Aww, very beautiful. Great job X

7/30/2005 c1

216ygg
Excellent! What a lovely read that was.

7/29/2005 c1

64Jane Piper
oh, very pretty. great work, keep it up!

-Taryn

(please review back)

7/29/2005 c1

17aries-diva-JC
wow... very sad, very moving, beautifully written... love d descriptions... putting it on my favs list fo sure... keep up d great work... and if ur ever bored, i'd love reviews from u on sum of my stuf...

7/29/2005 c1

11demon in disguise
Wow. Very good. :) I like it. :)

~Struggling-soul

7/29/2005 c1 Autumn-Flowers
"Pin point stars" - It reminds me of constellations.Wonderful.