for Serious8/10/2005 c1 
26Elizabeth Ebony
rich,deep and powerful.the last three lines...made me laugh for sum reason.i dont know why.
e.ebony.
26Elizabeth Ebonyrich,deep and powerful.the last three lines...made me laugh for sum reason.i dont know why.
e.ebony.
8/1/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
i liked this one. the last three lines were awesome. "call the fire brigade/it could be/ serious" nice. KW!~davida
i liked this one. the last three lines were awesome. "call the fire brigade/it could be/ serious" nice. KW!~davida
7/30/2005 c1 92Fate Defied
very good. keep writing stuff like this, and i'll keep reading it. ~shadowofyou~
92Fate Defiedvery good. keep writing stuff like this, and i'll keep reading it. ~shadowofyou~