for painful,beautiful,perfect8/18/2005 c1 
130Relayer
Amazing, memorable descriptions (as is the case with the rest of your work.) Excellent.
130RelayerAmazing, memorable descriptions (as is the case with the rest of your work.) Excellent.
8/9/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
The raw emotion is real. Very nice and angsty. The format was new to me. Good job on that. But it feel clichet for some reason. I don't know, its just a very attractive poem. Nice!=)
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionThe raw emotion is real. Very nice and angsty. The format was new to me. Good job on that. But it feel clichet for some reason. I don't know, its just a very attractive poem. Nice!=)
8/7/2005 c1 myno
i relate to the emotions- i am not a cutter, but this isn't actually about cutting, is it? because it doesn't feel that way.
i relate to the emotions- i am not a cutter, but this isn't actually about cutting, is it? because it doesn't feel that way.
8/6/2005 c1 14Jen calculates
Beautiful. My favourite part was the first line. "A screwed up paper angel" - it sort of sounds like crumpled elegance (I really can't find another way to describe it, it makes sense in my head...) and I caught a bit of dark humour in it.
Nicely written, typographically as well.
~ Jen
14Jen calculatesBeautiful. My favourite part was the first line. "A screwed up paper angel" - it sort of sounds like crumpled elegance (I really can't find another way to describe it, it makes sense in my head...) and I caught a bit of dark humour in it.
Nicely written, typographically as well.
~ Jen
8/2/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Perfect ending, the format and the way it just dropped off... like blood.
194Aslan IsraelPerfect ending, the format and the way it just dropped off... like blood.
8/1/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
i loved this poem, too. i loved how you used a paper angel as a comparison. very nice...well, KW!~davida
i loved this poem, too. i loved how you used a paper angel as a comparison. very nice...well, KW!~davida
7/31/2005 c1 addie pray
Beautiful. I had a much different experience with it. I view (ed) cutting as something caused by things, thoughts, feelings, extc that were so ugly and disgusting that you had to get it out. Bleed it out. Something like that. It's a bitch to stop though. It's an addiction like any other.
Anyways. Vivid imagery in this, even if, as explained above, I don't relate much.
Beautiful. I had a much different experience with it. I view (ed) cutting as something caused by things, thoughts, feelings, extc that were so ugly and disgusting that you had to get it out. Bleed it out. Something like that. It's a bitch to stop though. It's an addiction like any other.
Anyways. Vivid imagery in this, even if, as explained above, I don't relate much.
7/31/2005 c1 80citrus scented
beautiful, painful vivid imagery. taut and disturbing, yet somehow graceful. really wonderfully written. like the ending- it sort of spirals off.
80citrus scentedbeautiful, painful vivid imagery. taut and disturbing, yet somehow graceful. really wonderfully written. like the ending- it sort of spirals off.
7/31/2005 c1 87youzi
i don't really like cutting poems (or cutting, for that matter) so i shan't comment on the content of this piece. I really liked how you laid this pie out..particularly the interesting bracketing in "burn up this in(toxic)ating plastic life"..do keep writing !=D
87youzii don't really like cutting poems (or cutting, for that matter) so i shan't comment on the content of this piece. I really liked how you laid this pie out..particularly the interesting bracketing in "burn up this in(toxic)ating plastic life"..do keep writing !=D
7/30/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Glorify in the individual perhaps as well as inhale the appreciation of life in its entirety.
6Nobody-n-ParticularGlorify in the individual perhaps as well as inhale the appreciation of life in its entirety.
7/30/2005 c1 ThisCutUpAngel
I really like this! Much applause!
I really like this! Much applause!
7/30/2005 c1 92Fate Defied
good job. you're talking to a semi-cutter. i only did it once, but almost have again. but it's been almost two months since the last time. k/w~shadowofyou~
92Fate Defiedgood job. you're talking to a semi-cutter. i only did it once, but almost have again. but it's been almost two months since the last time. k/w~shadowofyou~