for Noontide Morphine7/31/2005 c1 Poe DeLasVegas
Good imagery. It was a little confusing, but perhaps this is because you have a "series" of poems...? I'm not sure. I'm a little slow, you see. Anyways, I really like your word choice here. "Soufflé of Cliché" was ingenious. My only suggestion would be perhaps to add a rhythm that is more easily caught.
Good imagery. It was a little confusing, but perhaps this is because you have a "series" of poems...? I'm not sure. I'm a little slow, you see. Anyways, I really like your word choice here. "Soufflé of Cliché" was ingenious. My only suggestion would be perhaps to add a rhythm that is more easily caught.