for Game of Hearts8/6/2005 c1 
32The Blind Guardian
One word for you ... APOSTROPHE! You NEED an apostrophe when writing "we'll" or any other such contraction, or else it just sounds strage!
Ok, that's the end of my short rant.
As far as the poem itself goes however, I liked it. It is sad, and reminds me of my old highschool days. It's sad when the one you are interested in is not interested in you, or doesn't seem to be. I don't think it is pathetic, and sometimes sappy can be a good thing
Remy/The Blind Guardian
32The Blind GuardianOne word for you ... APOSTROPHE! You NEED an apostrophe when writing "we'll" or any other such contraction, or else it just sounds strage!
Ok, that's the end of my short rant.
As far as the poem itself goes however, I liked it. It is sad, and reminds me of my old highschool days. It's sad when the one you are interested in is not interested in you, or doesn't seem to be. I don't think it is pathetic, and sometimes sappy can be a good thing
Remy/The Blind Guardian