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8/6/2005 c1 32The Blind Guardian
One word for you ... APOSTROPHE! You NEED an apostrophe when writing "we'll" or any other such contraction, or else it just sounds strage!

Ok, that's the end of my short rant.

As far as the poem itself goes however, I liked it. It is sad, and reminds me of my old highschool days. It's sad when the one you are interested in is not interested in you, or doesn't seem to be. I don't think it is pathetic, and sometimes sappy can be a good thing

Remy/The Blind Guardian
8/6/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
Its killing you... it's

I like this... very bittersweet.. awesome

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