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8/4/2005 c1 22The Sweetest Oblivion
wow.. interesting..? i'm glad you have the courage to write like that.. cuz i would never be able to..
8/2/2005 c1 59Unholy Haven
Very intense!

Did notice a couple of minor errors you'll probably want to edit.

Third line, you have "me" one too many times.

Also:

"But every cut make me moan"

change "make" to "makes"

I like this poem!
8/1/2005 c1 19she wants revenge
Wow... that was beautiful. Awesome. I love it. Just... wow. lol I hope your other poetry proves as beautifully emotionally loaded when you update this page. You're on my faves!

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