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8/1/2005 c1 1UnfortunateFortunate
*squeals* I love it! It's so confusing, and for some reason that made me love it! Yay! Lol, hey there, you!
8/1/2005 c1 87youzi
kind of diffused...hmm.. i like the fact that u made the piece rhyme. keep writing =D
8/1/2005 c1 5mahogany lampshade
Good poem! ^_^

But even though this poem is rhyming, maybe you should improve the rythm a little bit more.

Anyways, I still liked it! Keep writing!

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