for Royal Wedding8/3/2005 c2 
4Ember Silverly
Just as good as the first chapter. And I did realize this was supposed to be a short story, the other ideas just krept into my head as I read it...sorry if I sounded too mean. Anyway, great ending!
4Ember SilverlyJust as good as the first chapter. And I did realize this was supposed to be a short story, the other ideas just krept into my head as I read it...sorry if I sounded too mean. Anyway, great ending!
8/2/2005 c1 DrinkeroftheWind
Great story so far! I hope you update soon! So, are they going to have to runaway(ya know, that whole 'servants find out and tell the king' theme), or will it be taking a different path?.
Great story so far! I hope you update soon! So, are they going to have to runaway(ya know, that whole 'servants find out and tell the king' theme), or will it be taking a different path?.
8/2/2005 c1 8Sylv
This story has a rather interesting concept that has immediately grasped my attention. And I think it is well written though it is lacking a few aspects. Many times I feel that I haven't gotten to know any of the characters at all, and sometimes their motivation seems weak or nonexistent. Plus, I wonder how letting the princess/prince know his own secret prevents civil war. He could quite easily decide he hates the life of a woman or doesn't want to get married and cause a civil war by revealing his own secret, right? Besides those few problems I'm really enjoying the story and I can't wait to see where you're going from here. Keep up the good work!
8SylvThis story has a rather interesting concept that has immediately grasped my attention. And I think it is well written though it is lacking a few aspects. Many times I feel that I haven't gotten to know any of the characters at all, and sometimes their motivation seems weak or nonexistent. Plus, I wonder how letting the princess/prince know his own secret prevents civil war. He could quite easily decide he hates the life of a woman or doesn't want to get married and cause a civil war by revealing his own secret, right? Besides those few problems I'm really enjoying the story and I can't wait to see where you're going from here. Keep up the good work!
8/2/2005 c1 4Ember Silverly
Wow, great beginning! I can't wait to read more! Just out of curiousity though, isn't Alex a bit resentful of being made into a girl? I mean, I know, if I was a guy in that situation, I wouldn't like it a bit! If I were him, I think I'd go off and start a civil war just to get out of hte corsets! But, if he did that, it would be a very different story, I guess. Anyway, keep up the good work!
4Ember SilverlyWow, great beginning! I can't wait to read more! Just out of curiousity though, isn't Alex a bit resentful of being made into a girl? I mean, I know, if I was a guy in that situation, I wouldn't like it a bit! If I were him, I think I'd go off and start a civil war just to get out of hte corsets! But, if he did that, it would be a very different story, I guess. Anyway, keep up the good work!