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8/31/2006 c1 FFNeko
O... Yay, blood and gore!

I like the details... Sometimes I get too hyper to sit for a long time so I don't really have a long attention span, so I don't think I write good details but I really like your prologue *stops to breath*

I think this will be a really cool story.

Keep it up, cha!

(I ate too much sugar today :3)

8/2/2005 c1 Mintelwerke
Your style is very simple and effective. I like that. Just one mistake:

-So whose fate shall you seal, you’re precious world or me?-

In that line, it's ''your'' not ''you're.'' Other than that, it's perfect. It's intriguing. Very interesting, but you didn't give away much. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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