for The Devil and I12/17/2005 c10 dreamingducky
this story is really good.. please update soon!
this story is really good.. please update soon!
12/1/2005 c10 Sapphire beauty
THIS STORY IS SO GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT'S BEEN SO LONG!
THIS STORY IS SO GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT'S BEEN SO LONG!
10/1/2005 c10 
2The Big Pimpin Pimple
ure story's great can't wait to read the next chappie
and i have to add i feel empathy for ya i'm going thru hell in school too.
2The Big Pimpin Pimpleure story's great can't wait to read the next chappie
and i have to add i feel empathy for ya i'm going thru hell in school too.
10/1/2005 c7 The Big Pimpin Pimple
this chappie made me giggle aw he LIKEs her heh heh heh. This story is awsomeness and i always knew you had a great vocabulary but woww you have a vast one. any way i have 3 more chaps to go and you better updated son or else
lots and lots of luv from yur fave cuz TAZ
this chappie made me giggle aw he LIKEs her heh heh heh. This story is awsomeness and i always knew you had a great vocabulary but woww you have a vast one. any way i have 3 more chaps to go and you better updated son or else
lots and lots of luv from yur fave cuz TAZ
10/1/2005 c10 8bagelmoo
I got a whole big long thing just for me! I feel so special. Thank you so much, this helped a ton. I think I mostly had issues with all the characters since there are so many! Thanks again!
8bagelmooI got a whole big long thing just for me! I feel so special. Thank you so much, this helped a ton. I think I mostly had issues with all the characters since there are so many! Thanks again!
10/1/2005 c3 2The Big Pimpin Pimple
I forgot to reveiw for chap 2 so i should go back but really good story (i haven't read this chap yet)but chap two vas very good. well um happy ramadan "merry" i'll prolly see you sumtime soon. i would email you but as you already know ima a lazy bum.
2The Big Pimpin PimpleI forgot to reveiw for chap 2 so i should go back but really good story (i haven't read this chap yet)but chap two vas very good. well um happy ramadan "merry" i'll prolly see you sumtime soon. i would email you but as you already know ima a lazy bum.
10/1/2005 c1 The Big Pimpin Pimple
*wipes a way a tear* my dear cousin has grown up to become a wonderful writer *sighs* great story loved the descriptions. well i have a couple more chaps to read so i'll leave another review somewhere along the line oh and you better read a story of mine I know where you live! (just kiddning but i do know where you live) okie dokietoodlesyour fave cuzTaz
*wipes a way a tear* my dear cousin has grown up to become a wonderful writer *sighs* great story loved the descriptions. well i have a couple more chaps to read so i'll leave another review somewhere along the line oh and you better read a story of mine I know where you live! (just kiddning but i do know where you live) okie dokietoodlesyour fave cuzTaz
9/29/2005 c10 1Humor Me Pink
Oh, I really enjoy this story. Update sooner, perhaps. Could you add some more descriptions? You have the perfect amount of dialogue, yet... *shrugs*
1Humor Me PinkOh, I really enjoy this story. Update sooner, perhaps. Could you add some more descriptions? You have the perfect amount of dialogue, yet... *shrugs*
9/26/2005 c9 Summer Raine
hiya! i'm currently too lazy to sign in -sigh- anyways..i'm a new reader..and er..reviewer! hehe..i'm really enjoying this story, and i cant wait for the next update; it just seems to flow so well together that it's hard not to like it and just fall in love with the main character. You're writing style is amazing, and i'm envious to say that i havent noticed a single grammar or spelling mistake since chapter 1. I'm dying to find out what happen in the next chapter so update as soon as you can, since i know how school can unfurtunatly get in the way of writing, for it's the same thing for me. Keep up the awesome work and dont forget to update ^_^
hiya! i'm currently too lazy to sign in -sigh- anyways..i'm a new reader..and er..reviewer! hehe..i'm really enjoying this story, and i cant wait for the next update; it just seems to flow so well together that it's hard not to like it and just fall in love with the main character. You're writing style is amazing, and i'm envious to say that i havent noticed a single grammar or spelling mistake since chapter 1. I'm dying to find out what happen in the next chapter so update as soon as you can, since i know how school can unfurtunatly get in the way of writing, for it's the same thing for me. Keep up the awesome work and dont forget to update ^_^
9/25/2005 c9 8bagelmoo
Is anyone else confused? I would really like to know why Jack and Anthony aren't friends, and what the whole deal is in the library. What are the gonna do, whip out books and throw them at each other? And I'm confused as to how Lilah has changed a whole lot. And the whole thing with Mae confuses me, too. I don't get why Lilah and Mae hate each other all of a sudden, besides the whole Rosalyn issue. Or is that it? Bah, I think I need to reread the entire story and figure this stuff out.
8bagelmooIs anyone else confused? I would really like to know why Jack and Anthony aren't friends, and what the whole deal is in the library. What are the gonna do, whip out books and throw them at each other? And I'm confused as to how Lilah has changed a whole lot. And the whole thing with Mae confuses me, too. I don't get why Lilah and Mae hate each other all of a sudden, besides the whole Rosalyn issue. Or is that it? Bah, I think I need to reread the entire story and figure this stuff out.
9/25/2005 c9 2LadyWriter
I loved the chappie. Man I want to smack Mae and Lilah too... Shove them in a room together and make them work it out... Nice chapter. I wonder if the guy in the park will be returning? Great chapter though and I hope you update whenever you get the time. Great job!
2LadyWriterI loved the chappie. Man I want to smack Mae and Lilah too... Shove them in a room together and make them work it out... Nice chapter. I wonder if the guy in the park will be returning? Great chapter though and I hope you update whenever you get the time. Great job!
9/18/2005 c8 6Pandemonium Express
eep! This story is incredible, but this girl just seems to get into one predicament after another. I can't wait for the next update, but I don't want to rush you. I understand the whole brutal, 'let's torture them slowly over a spitfire' situation with school. Honestly, have teachers no mercy? Anyways, I'll stop blabbering. ^^; What I'm trying to say in way too many words is that I love your story.
6Pandemonium Expresseep! This story is incredible, but this girl just seems to get into one predicament after another. I can't wait for the next update, but I don't want to rush you. I understand the whole brutal, 'let's torture them slowly over a spitfire' situation with school. Honestly, have teachers no mercy? Anyways, I'll stop blabbering. ^^; What I'm trying to say in way too many words is that I love your story.
9/6/2005 c8 1yellowvespagirl
i would say i am about to fall over with the weight of all the cliches in this story, but i must say that your clever additions of wit and humor are supporting me. anyone who's met most of my other reviews will know that it's rare for me to praise people. the only problem i see is that some of your situations are just a tad bit unbelievable- it's a little bit TOO coincidental for the two to just "happen" to be going to the same school, and for the random chance to arise where they sit next to each other on the plane. so cut down on this high level of obnoxiously unbelieveable incidents, and you'll be fine.
1yellowvespagirli would say i am about to fall over with the weight of all the cliches in this story, but i must say that your clever additions of wit and humor are supporting me. anyone who's met most of my other reviews will know that it's rare for me to praise people. the only problem i see is that some of your situations are just a tad bit unbelievable- it's a little bit TOO coincidental for the two to just "happen" to be going to the same school, and for the random chance to arise where they sit next to each other on the plane. so cut down on this high level of obnoxiously unbelieveable incidents, and you'll be fine.