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10/10/2005 c1 Poe DeLasVegas
Slightly disturbing, but it personifies the macabre psychological horror of the Holocaust. I certainly couldn't have pulled off anything so...twisted sounded without looking fake or emo.

It seems real, and not forced, though I can't seem to "get" the "The eternal cavity you swath worthy of Nike" line. For one, it disrupts the flow, and for two, I have no idea what you mean by Nike. The shoe brand? I don't know.

Good job, though.
8/6/2005 c1 72Earthbound Angel 49
the imagery is great and kind of disturbing. I like it.
8/3/2005 c1 12eighteen hundred
I thought this was excellent. Just wonderfully written, good usage of rhyme, amazing content just in general.

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