for Senstive Pornography10/18/2013 c1 Guest
This is shit
This is shit
6/9/2012 c2 xiaomeinoir21
Damn thats how they feel about black women in London? I don't want to go there lol
Damn thats how they feel about black women in London? I don't want to go there lol
9/19/2011 c12 golden62
I guess some girls like her would allow anything for money. I don't see this as a love relationship it's more about debauchery of any sort and profit.
A man who loves a woman would never advertise her and their sex lives to the world.
The hero grosses me out, there is no way he cares about her, her friend is right she could do so much better than that perv
I guess some girls like her would allow anything for money. I don't see this as a love relationship it's more about debauchery of any sort and profit.
A man who loves a woman would never advertise her and their sex lives to the world.
The hero grosses me out, there is no way he cares about her, her friend is right she could do so much better than that perv
9/14/2011 c12 susan
I forgot to ask, could you please warm that there is m rated subject in your works, being that it was T, I thought it was safe.
Thank you
I forgot to ask, could you please warm that there is m rated subject in your works, being that it was T, I thought it was safe.
Thank you
9/14/2011 c12 Susan
I can see you're a talented writer and this was interesting, I guess I don't buy this guy as a hero or a love interest. The work he does makes him unreliable in my eyes, he says he loves her but has no problem putting naked erotic pictures of her in magazines for the world to see. Even their sex lives are not private, unless this wasn't meant to be a romance but erotica?
Why would a man who loves a woman do that, he is not possessive or protective of her at all, so he couldn't really love her, it's about the sex and probably won't last and why would a woman who has been through the trauma she has allow herself to be degraded like that.
I am so sorry but I just didn't find anything about them to like.
I just didn't feel any love or romance between them, just sex.
I can see you're a talented writer and this was interesting, I guess I don't buy this guy as a hero or a love interest. The work he does makes him unreliable in my eyes, he says he loves her but has no problem putting naked erotic pictures of her in magazines for the world to see. Even their sex lives are not private, unless this wasn't meant to be a romance but erotica?
Why would a man who loves a woman do that, he is not possessive or protective of her at all, so he couldn't really love her, it's about the sex and probably won't last and why would a woman who has been through the trauma she has allow herself to be degraded like that.
I am so sorry but I just didn't find anything about them to like.
I just didn't feel any love or romance between them, just sex.
3/19/2011 c12 BreBre
Three words.Bomb.Ass.Story. :) About to look up the other one you mentioned at the bottom of the last chapter.
P.S GREAT WRITTING!
Three words.Bomb.Ass.Story. :) About to look up the other one you mentioned at the bottom of the last chapter.
P.S GREAT WRITTING!
12/30/2010 c12 
1Sushay1221
I love this! Your chacters were so great and I'm officaly a stalker for you. Please write more. We need more interracial love here.
1Sushay1221I love this! Your chacters were so great and I'm officaly a stalker for you. Please write more. We need more interracial love here.
2/7/2007 c11 TooLazyToLoginThoughICould
Um...you've had some spelling and grammar mistakes throughout this whole story, I was able to overlook them but WHO the heck is Soujirou?
Um...you've had some spelling and grammar mistakes throughout this whole story, I was able to overlook them but WHO the heck is Soujirou?
1/5/2007 c12 CHIIJOY
I love this story so much. Aw, there should like be a sequel or something for when the baby comes. Man, this was so cool since it's like even with her having issues and his own issues they worked it out. I hate too many stories where the people are like so unrealistic and the flaws are like the basics with body and all of that. Anywhos, I loved it and thanks for writing it. :D
I love this story so much. Aw, there should like be a sequel or something for when the baby comes. Man, this was so cool since it's like even with her having issues and his own issues they worked it out. I hate too many stories where the people are like so unrealistic and the flaws are like the basics with body and all of that. Anywhos, I loved it and thanks for writing it. :D
12/10/2006 c12 2JusticeWriter
Simon is cute. Haha. I know he's fictional, but he seems like he's a total hottie. Lol. Great story. :)
2JusticeWriterSimon is cute. Haha. I know he's fictional, but he seems like he's a total hottie. Lol. Great story. :)