for Senstive Pornography9/19/2006 c12 mrskelley
I like your stories...this one was good. iliked how you incorporated today's issues, and still had an happy ending. Good job and keep writing. i like reading interracial romance stories involving black women and white men, mostly because I am married to a white man, and I can relate.
I like your stories...this one was good. iliked how you incorporated today's issues, and still had an happy ending. Good job and keep writing. i like reading interracial romance stories involving black women and white men, mostly because I am married to a white man, and I can relate.
7/5/2006 c12 
35The Fourth Fate
Ah I LOVE it. It's perfect. Absolute PERFECTION. OMG. I LOVE IT. SO MUCH. And the ending is PERFECT. Just what I expected for them! AH. I can't believe it's over! OMG. I LOVE it. -stanind ovation- BRAVO. This was just amazing. I laughed, cried, stayed on the edge of my seat the whole time, and just... loved every minute of it. This is was amazing. Omg. I'm SO happy with the ending. I can't even tell you.
35The Fourth FateAh I LOVE it. It's perfect. Absolute PERFECTION. OMG. I LOVE IT. SO MUCH. And the ending is PERFECT. Just what I expected for them! AH. I can't believe it's over! OMG. I LOVE it. -stanind ovation- BRAVO. This was just amazing. I laughed, cried, stayed on the edge of my seat the whole time, and just... loved every minute of it. This is was amazing. Omg. I'm SO happy with the ending. I can't even tell you.
7/5/2006 c11 The Fourth Fate
ACK. He's SO gross. AH. After all that being sweet and patient and not scaring her during the photo shoot... ACK. CAMERA? That reminds me of this israeli movie, HaCochavim Shel Shlomi (or, bonjour misour shlomi, the english title) where this girl is married and has twins and they're really hard to take care of so she never has sex with her husband. But when he looks at porn to satisfy himself, she gets furious. Only then he puts porn of THEM on the internet. It's really funny. But yeah so it reminds me of that. ECK. YUCK. He's a perv. LEAVE HIM MINA! JUST RUN AWAY!
ACK. He's SO gross. AH. After all that being sweet and patient and not scaring her during the photo shoot... ACK. CAMERA? That reminds me of this israeli movie, HaCochavim Shel Shlomi (or, bonjour misour shlomi, the english title) where this girl is married and has twins and they're really hard to take care of so she never has sex with her husband. But when he looks at porn to satisfy himself, she gets furious. Only then he puts porn of THEM on the internet. It's really funny. But yeah so it reminds me of that. ECK. YUCK. He's a perv. LEAVE HIM MINA! JUST RUN AWAY!
7/1/2006 c10 The Fourth Fate
Aww. Sad. I'm understanding the title more and more now. It's really good. Sad but good. It's moving quickly though, them falling in love. Oh well. I still love it. And her life is SO sad. Ahh... I'm going to cry or something... I hope nothing else happens to her. But Simon DEFINATELY is going to be there for her, it seems. Aw. He's sweet. Even if he IS a perv... And I love the part about fixing his writing. Too cute and funny.
Aww. Sad. I'm understanding the title more and more now. It's really good. Sad but good. It's moving quickly though, them falling in love. Oh well. I still love it. And her life is SO sad. Ahh... I'm going to cry or something... I hope nothing else happens to her. But Simon DEFINATELY is going to be there for her, it seems. Aw. He's sweet. Even if he IS a perv... And I love the part about fixing his writing. Too cute and funny.
6/21/2006 c2 138Aero Faerie Extraordinaire
Hey. I read a couple of your other stories and I like what you've written. Cool chapter.
Go Jamaica! I'm half Jamaican. We rock! And I was born in England too.
FCUK. They do make *everything*! I have some FCUK bedsheets. It was a struggle not to burst out laughing when my mum gave them to me, and ask her what kind of girl she thought I was. lol
Much love,
Aero
138Aero Faerie ExtraordinaireHey. I read a couple of your other stories and I like what you've written. Cool chapter.
Go Jamaica! I'm half Jamaican. We rock! And I was born in England too.
FCUK. They do make *everything*! I have some FCUK bedsheets. It was a struggle not to burst out laughing when my mum gave them to me, and ask her what kind of girl she thought I was. lol
Much love,
Aero
6/16/2006 c9 35The Fourth Fate
Ah! I HATE David. Now he's giving her nightmares? THis is so sad. I have to go to sleep now, but I'll read more later. I love this. It's so sad but it's really good. I love how they fell asleep like that. That's SO cute. I'm dying to know what happens next.
35The Fourth FateAh! I HATE David. Now he's giving her nightmares? THis is so sad. I have to go to sleep now, but I'll read more later. I love this. It's so sad but it's really good. I love how they fell asleep like that. That's SO cute. I'm dying to know what happens next.
6/16/2006 c8 The Fourth Fate
OMG. That is the saddest thing I've ever heard of! Omg. And then Simon just beat up David like that... I love this story and how fast it's moving, but I think maybe it's moving a little too fast. I don't know... I guess that's how oyu intended it, though. I really love it. I'm like addicted.
OMG. That is the saddest thing I've ever heard of! Omg. And then Simon just beat up David like that... I love this story and how fast it's moving, but I think maybe it's moving a little too fast. I don't know... I guess that's how oyu intended it, though. I really love it. I'm like addicted.
6/16/2006 c7 The Fourth Fate
OH NO! I HATE DAVID. EW. He's awful. That's SO sad about Mina. Omg. And how David's dad worked at the police station... Ah. I'm really glad she explained everything to him. Omg. I really need to keep reading. Ahh!
OH NO! I HATE DAVID. EW. He's awful. That's SO sad about Mina. Omg. And how David's dad worked at the police station... Ah. I'm really glad she explained everything to him. Omg. I really need to keep reading. Ahh!
6/16/2006 c6 The Fourth Fate
Aww! They really DO like each other! It's SO cute. And their love is actually going somewhere! Ah! This is so cute and exciting. I love. Sorry I can't review much. I gotta read on! Ah! Ew David's such a perv... You know something funny? I just noticed this: I've been working on a story for some time now, A Little Too Much. My main character is Aiden and his sidekick kind of person who is more experienced than him is named David. That's like if you mashed this story and the Aiden stories (of yours) together! Great minds think alike!
Aww! They really DO like each other! It's SO cute. And their love is actually going somewhere! Ah! This is so cute and exciting. I love. Sorry I can't review much. I gotta read on! Ah! Ew David's such a perv... You know something funny? I just noticed this: I've been working on a story for some time now, A Little Too Much. My main character is Aiden and his sidekick kind of person who is more experienced than him is named David. That's like if you mashed this story and the Aiden stories (of yours) together! Great minds think alike!
6/16/2006 c5 The Fourth Fate
Ooh burn! I'm glad she took the job. The part about getting down on her knees was really funny. And aw, he was so sweet about making sure not to look. But did she let go of her sheet when she slapped him? I gotta read on to find out!
Ooh burn! I'm glad she took the job. The part about getting down on her knees was really funny. And aw, he was so sweet about making sure not to look. But did she let go of her sheet when she slapped him? I gotta read on to find out!
6/16/2006 c4 The Fourth Fate
Oh no... He's racist? That bites. But wow. This is complex. It deals with big issues like discrimination and little ones, like trying not to seem too foward with a guy.. Wow. I love both the characters. They're so cute and sweet. They definately need to be together. I love the rain scene and how Simon keeps snapping these pictures. Wow. I can't can't can't wait to see where this is going.
Oh no... He's racist? That bites. But wow. This is complex. It deals with big issues like discrimination and little ones, like trying not to seem too foward with a guy.. Wow. I love both the characters. They're so cute and sweet. They definately need to be together. I love the rain scene and how Simon keeps snapping these pictures. Wow. I can't can't can't wait to see where this is going.
6/16/2006 c2 The Fourth Fate
THis is SO cute! I love that it switched and showed Simon's perspective. I'm glad he's not gay... Nothing against gay people, just that it would put a damper on their relationship. And I'm super rooting for it. I can't wait to see where this going, though I have some ideas... Hee hee from the title. Speaking of hee hee, the whole FCUK thing is hilarious. I love it.
THis is SO cute! I love that it switched and showed Simon's perspective. I'm glad he's not gay... Nothing against gay people, just that it would put a damper on their relationship. And I'm super rooting for it. I can't wait to see where this going, though I have some ideas... Hee hee from the title. Speaking of hee hee, the whole FCUK thing is hilarious. I love it.
4/12/2006 c1 The Fourth Fate
Ahh I love it so far! Omg. It's so cute. I love Simon! He's so sweet. The "Coffee Chick" line is too funny. I can't wait for more.
Ahh I love it so far! Omg. It's so cute. I love Simon! He's so sweet. The "Coffee Chick" line is too funny. I can't wait for more.
2/19/2006 c12 11SuicideChild
Aw... its over. I loved it! I'm glad Mina is doing better and that Simon was there for her. *kills David and Mina's brother* (happy exhale) I feel better. This is a great story. You are a great writer.
11SuicideChildAw... its over. I loved it! I'm glad Mina is doing better and that Simon was there for her. *kills David and Mina's brother* (happy exhale) I feel better. This is a great story. You are a great writer.
1/28/2006 c12 1ZenBabe
hey! omg I just read this whole story and I loved it! It was fantastic! I really love your writing style! And the idea to have an interacial couple was really good and interesting. I was just wondering, have you ever watched the show 'American Dreams' cuz it's a really good show that unfortunitely got canceled but it dealed with a lot of stuff like that and I dunno I thought u might be interested. Anyway this story was great! the chemistry between Simon and Mina was undeniable, you are an incredible writter!
1ZenBabehey! omg I just read this whole story and I loved it! It was fantastic! I really love your writing style! And the idea to have an interacial couple was really good and interesting. I was just wondering, have you ever watched the show 'American Dreams' cuz it's a really good show that unfortunitely got canceled but it dealed with a lot of stuff like that and I dunno I thought u might be interested. Anyway this story was great! the chemistry between Simon and Mina was undeniable, you are an incredible writter!