for Senstive Pornography11/23/2005 c10 Eboni
I can not believe the girl's got herpes! How can this great story end happily when the girl's got herpes! They'll never be able to really have sex, or kids, but hey what do I know. Love is love, right? I just didn't see that coming. Update soon.
I can not believe the girl's got herpes! How can this great story end happily when the girl's got herpes! They'll never be able to really have sex, or kids, but hey what do I know. Love is love, right? I just didn't see that coming. Update soon.
11/8/2005 c8 
3hollyg20
I really need to keep a better eye on this story :) I still am loving it. Mina and Simon are both becoming such complex characters. I can't wait to see what develops next!
3hollyg20I really need to keep a better eye on this story :) I still am loving it. Mina and Simon are both becoming such complex characters. I can't wait to see what develops next!
10/17/2005 c8 Eboni
Thanks for the two chapter update. So much drama going on. I love how you added another dimension to Mina's character. I'm liking both characters more and more. Update soon.
Thanks for the two chapter update. So much drama going on. I love how you added another dimension to Mina's character. I'm liking both characters more and more. Update soon.
10/17/2005 c8 16sam the bear
Poor, poor Simon he's going crazy. at this rate, he's heading for the nearest mental hospital in less than a week! keep up the good work!
16sam the bearPoor, poor Simon he's going crazy. at this rate, he's heading for the nearest mental hospital in less than a week! keep up the good work!
10/17/2005 c7 sam the bear
i had a feeling that it was Simon's friend who told him those horrible things who raped Mina. i hope he gets his just rewards!
i had a feeling that it was Simon's friend who told him those horrible things who raped Mina. i hope he gets his just rewards!
10/16/2005 c7 3Ms. Zye Inger Durr
this story is so awesome i can't wait to read the rest. i'm so excite (and i know i forgot the d, but i'm just that excite)
3Ms. Zye Inger Durrthis story is so awesome i can't wait to read the rest. i'm so excite (and i know i forgot the d, but i'm just that excite)
10/12/2005 c6 Eboni
Thanks for the update. This is a great story. I have to admit, with this chapter we have gotten to see a new, more vunerable side to Simon and I like him more now than I did at the beginning. Update soon.
Thanks for the update. This is a great story. I have to admit, with this chapter we have gotten to see a new, more vunerable side to Simon and I like him more now than I did at the beginning. Update soon.
10/11/2005 c6 3hollyg20
I just love seeing that you updated...it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) This story is just getting better and better (love story...yay!) I can't wait to see more!
3hollyg20I just love seeing that you updated...it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) This story is just getting better and better (love story...yay!) I can't wait to see more!
10/10/2005 c6 16sam the bear
aww... i hope they don't end up having sex cause then Mina would probaly feel used and then her friend Diane would probaly call Simon a retarded bastard and bash him to kingdom come. sorry about the language but i have a feeling that that will happen. though keep updating i still do want to know what would REALLY happen.
16sam the bearaww... i hope they don't end up having sex cause then Mina would probaly feel used and then her friend Diane would probaly call Simon a retarded bastard and bash him to kingdom come. sorry about the language but i have a feeling that that will happen. though keep updating i still do want to know what would REALLY happen.
10/10/2005 c3 sam the bear
when is this set in? 1950's? it's supposed to be 2005! maybe it's just me but i thought people were much more open now (wait maybe it IS JUST ME!) Somebody tell me if i'm not living in the right era because i really thought interracial relationships are totally common today (as in 2005). Well its all going fine, update soon!
when is this set in? 1950's? it's supposed to be 2005! maybe it's just me but i thought people were much more open now (wait maybe it IS JUST ME!) Somebody tell me if i'm not living in the right era because i really thought interracial relationships are totally common today (as in 2005). Well its all going fine, update soon!
10/10/2005 c2 sam the bear
i didn't know they made condoms! wtf? that is just plain WEIRD. Well i like the story so far; i'm also into the whole interracial relationships it makes things intersting. Different cultures mixed together can get you a very nice change. keep updating!
i didn't know they made condoms! wtf? that is just plain WEIRD. Well i like the story so far; i'm also into the whole interracial relationships it makes things intersting. Different cultures mixed together can get you a very nice change. keep updating!
10/10/2005 c1 sam the bear
The title for this chapter really describes everything that has happened in a nut shell. Good work! keep updating!
The title for this chapter really describes everything that has happened in a nut shell. Good work! keep updating!
10/9/2005 c6 esereht
why oh why did you cut it there? aaww! that was nice! cliffhanger! argh! update soon cant wait!
why oh why did you cut it there? aaww! that was nice! cliffhanger! argh! update soon cant wait!