
8/9/2005 c3 dinah
Wow! I love this, Great story. I love a good interracial fic, and this is fantastic. Update soon.
Wow! I love this, Great story. I love a good interracial fic, and this is fantastic. Update soon.
8/4/2005 c2
6Our Lady Of Sorrow
Man, FCUK makes condoms? WOW. WHO would have thought? :DI like this point of view thing going on, I'm a big fan, I use it in my stories sometimes too!

Man, FCUK makes condoms? WOW. WHO would have thought? :DI like this point of view thing going on, I'm a big fan, I use it in my stories sometimes too!
8/3/2005 c1
3hollyg20
Have to admit, the title caught me. I think this is a very interesting start to a story and I love your characters so far. Keep up the good work!

Have to admit, the title caught me. I think this is a very interesting start to a story and I love your characters so far. Keep up the good work!
8/3/2005 c1
6Our Lady Of Sorrow
Not bad, it's a great start, and I was so interested by the summary that I just had to give it a chance. I am so glad I did. I can't wait for an update!

Not bad, it's a great start, and I was so interested by the summary that I just had to give it a chance. I am so glad I did. I can't wait for an update!
8/3/2005 c1
12it's only castles burning
Interesting. . .I'll be keeping my eye on this. . .he title's what drew me in, good work on that. . .the summary could use a bit of work, though. Keep it up!

Interesting. . .I'll be keeping my eye on this. . .he title's what drew me in, good work on that. . .the summary could use a bit of work, though. Keep it up!
8/3/2005 c1 Sonia
soundz cool so far...keep writing,.ur pretty good at it
soundz cool so far...keep writing,.ur pretty good at it