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1/2/2006 c1 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!

Well, the rhyming is a little forced, but I like it all the same. The depth of feeling is beautiful and the imagery is perfect. Good job. KEEP IT UP!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

P.S. Thanks for the review!
8/3/2005 c1 230lovelikeamixtape
i love the language in this, and the metaphor, and just the overall feeling and idea it transmits. this is so great.
8/3/2005 c1 9garn92
Wow, that's really good. Deep, too.

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