for Broken Hearts1/2/2006 c1 
136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
Well, the rhyming is a little forced, but I like it all the same. The depth of feeling is beautiful and the imagery is perfect. Good job. KEEP IT UP!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
P.S. Thanks for the review!
136LilLaTLuvHey!
Well, the rhyming is a little forced, but I like it all the same. The depth of feeling is beautiful and the imagery is perfect. Good job. KEEP IT UP!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
P.S. Thanks for the review!
8/3/2005 c1 230lovelikeamixtape
i love the language in this, and the metaphor, and just the overall feeling and idea it transmits. this is so great.
230lovelikeamixtapei love the language in this, and the metaphor, and just the overall feeling and idea it transmits. this is so great.