for On a Saturday Morning10/9/2006 c1 
41sarah1491
Wow. You say it came out of nowhere? This is amazing! I am really not an expert on love at this point in my life, and all my love poems are made up as well, but how do you do it? Yours are just so amazing and believable! I am starting to envy your talents. Haha. No, I don't like jealousy. :P Anyways, awesome job! :)
- Sarah
41sarah1491Wow. You say it came out of nowhere? This is amazing! I am really not an expert on love at this point in my life, and all my love poems are made up as well, but how do you do it? Yours are just so amazing and believable! I am starting to envy your talents. Haha. No, I don't like jealousy. :P Anyways, awesome job! :)
- Sarah
9/25/2005 c1 60Lovejoy
Wow... soft and gentle with beautiful imagery. This is an excellent poem and it made me smile and cheered me up, thinking back... I loved it. You're a truly talented writer!
60LovejoyWow... soft and gentle with beautiful imagery. This is an excellent poem and it made me smile and cheered me up, thinking back... I loved it. You're a truly talented writer!
9/5/2005 c1 17burnisbetter
This was beautiful, especially the lines "Wanting nothing but youAnd you wanting only me." Good job, and keep on writing!
17burnisbetterThis was beautiful, especially the lines "Wanting nothing but youAnd you wanting only me." Good job, and keep on writing!
8/24/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I like this, the imagery is very good. Very nicely written. Great song. Thanks for reviewing. QueenVixta
270queenvixtaI like this, the imagery is very good. Very nicely written. Great song. Thanks for reviewing. QueenVixta
8/20/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
its beautiful... I love the chorus and the repition of ending lines.. beautiful description of love
612simpleplan13its beautiful... I love the chorus and the repition of ending lines.. beautiful description of love
8/15/2005 c1 binderem
This is so beautiful! I could just imagine a melody along with the lyrics. It was a sweet, floaty song, and the wording flowed perfectly. Great job.
This is so beautiful! I could just imagine a melody along with the lyrics. It was a sweet, floaty song, and the wording flowed perfectly. Great job.
8/4/2005 c1 12eighteen hundred
This was good as a song in that I didn't need the tune to appreciate the lyrical value. Not bad.
12eighteen hundredThis was good as a song in that I didn't need the tune to appreciate the lyrical value. Not bad.