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1/25/2013 c8 2Marguerite Grimmett
Oh, I've seen shorter chapters in published works. Keep up the good work!
1/21/2013 c2 Marguerite Grimmett
Wow, it's only the first chapter and I love the story already! :D
5/13/2009 c9 1Sapphire Star328
hey I'm really liking your story so far. This is my first time reading a story with Black lead characters (me being Black and all). and I can relate to the ultimate virgin thing. haha.

unrequited love is the worst ever.

I'm glad Melissa has someone that likes her in return

looking forward to the rest of this story and the sequel.
1/23/2009 c36 5elisieepee
OMG WOH :D I LOVE THIS :DD
1/23/2009 c35 elisieepee
oh.my.god.

NO THAT..THAT CANT BEE

NO NO NO THEY CANT GET TOGETHER !

CHRIS AND MELISSA FTW !
1/23/2009 c31 elisieepee
:O NO

NO NO NO NO

NO MELISSA DESERVES FRIENDS WHO DOESNT LIKE DARYL :(
1/23/2009 c27 elisieepee
oh...god...

Cheryl you bitch man =='

LOVING THE STORY :)
1/23/2009 c26 elisieepee
:D
1/22/2009 c16 elisieepee
i dont want them to be together =='

i know its weird but i dont =_='
1/21/2009 c6 elisieepee
:)
6/24/2008 c1 rina
haha...dude, i'm 20 and i've still never held hands or been kissed. i have honestly never had any type of romantic relationship with a guy. maybe youre writing this story about me!
3/2/2008 c44 julieell093
hey this is a really good story i usually dont find stories about african american characterrs, jus white or asian ppl. it stood out to my that she was not a stick figure, that she had a ffigure[: i love stories that r real and not jus fiction. good job now im moving on to ur sequel[=
1/24/2008 c43 xxily4everxx
wow this is such a long but good story ^.^
12/1/2007 c24 3the-ryter121
I really like the story so far, even if I think that Melissa should dump Daryl and go out with Bryan but that is another topic. The thing that I want to know is why isn't Melissa as torn up about lying to her dad on a daily basis as she is cheating on her boyfriend? Why does she feel less guilt for one than the other?
11/13/2007 c4 1claretmadeira
Oh my god, my birthday is August 23rd! (And 22nd, seeing as to how I was born at midnight, and plus the fact that they wrote 22nd instead of 23rd, but...yeah)...
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