4/17/2016 c1 Monalisa ksbs
I know this is weird.
But-
I love u.
As a friend. Jk really love u! Hope u post more!
I know this is weird.
But-
I love u.
As a friend. Jk really love u! Hope u post more!
6/11/2015 c1 AJ
Interesting story. Going to add this on my list of books to buy.
Interesting story. Going to add this on my list of books to buy.
1/20/2015 c1 It's 2019
I just had to review this even though I've never even read it, happy 3000 reviews! :D
I just had to review this even though I've never even read it, happy 3000 reviews! :D
10/21/2014 c34 1MileyRowling
Yeah...I have this on my Kindle and never left a review. This is probably my favorite story by you. I urge everyone to get it on Kindle. I think I have all of your books on Kindle to be honest...
Yeah...I have this on my Kindle and never left a review. This is probably my favorite story by you. I urge everyone to get it on Kindle. I think I have all of your books on Kindle to be honest...
10/20/2014 c2 retrospect129
Wow, wow, wow. I really enjoyed it. I thought your characters were all very real, except for the neighbor downstairs, for some reason I still didn't like her. ( forgive me for not remembering the names, I stopped reading at 3am this morning!) I thought your main character was quite flawed; which is what I liked about her, she kept making mistakes but it made her much more realistic to me! Jack was so lovable! He is just so cute, I am debating whether to read the sequels; only because they cost about £3 each and there is quite a few! Um what else to say? Micky confused me a bit, I still don't really understand why he was horrible particularity to Talia, it just made him seem like an arse to me! Matts' reaction to it all was very realistic as well so kudos to that!
Anyways, I'll probs go review it on goodreads and amazon now, thanks for sharing this story with us I really enjoyed it! To all whom look at reviews, it is definitely worth downloading!
Wow, wow, wow. I really enjoyed it. I thought your characters were all very real, except for the neighbor downstairs, for some reason I still didn't like her. ( forgive me for not remembering the names, I stopped reading at 3am this morning!) I thought your main character was quite flawed; which is what I liked about her, she kept making mistakes but it made her much more realistic to me! Jack was so lovable! He is just so cute, I am debating whether to read the sequels; only because they cost about £3 each and there is quite a few! Um what else to say? Micky confused me a bit, I still don't really understand why he was horrible particularity to Talia, it just made him seem like an arse to me! Matts' reaction to it all was very realistic as well so kudos to that!
Anyways, I'll probs go review it on goodreads and amazon now, thanks for sharing this story with us I really enjoyed it! To all whom look at reviews, it is definitely worth downloading!
10/19/2014 c1 retrospect129
Just downloaded this on Kindle, very glad it is still free so thank you! I will tell you what I think about ti at the end, I am looking forward to reading it!
Just downloaded this on Kindle, very glad it is still free so thank you! I will tell you what I think about ti at the end, I am looking forward to reading it!
3/25/2014 c1 chocolategoodness
*your*
Lol, came back to correct. Just saw your reply and read what I wrote.. Haha! :p
*your*
Lol, came back to correct. Just saw your reply and read what I wrote.. Haha! :p
3/21/2014 c1 Mary Lipski
I just read this story today and I an honestly say that NO other story has brought me to tears! Mind you, I've read ALOT! I couldn't put this book down. There was no stopping. I think, besides the lovey-dovey stuff, that the fact that Natalia wasn't a Mary-Sue, made me love this story even more! And jack wasn't perfect! His dark past made the plot even better. I loved it!
I just read this story today and I an honestly say that NO other story has brought me to tears! Mind you, I've read ALOT! I couldn't put this book down. There was no stopping. I think, besides the lovey-dovey stuff, that the fact that Natalia wasn't a Mary-Sue, made me love this story even more! And jack wasn't perfect! His dark past made the plot even better. I loved it!
3/16/2014 c34 74AlysonSerenaStone
I must say I really did enjoy this story. I loved the ending, so happy that everything worked out. I also loved the idea of Simone and Michael being together. I thought that Simone and Sam would've been the ones to get together! I also liked seeing tally grow. I think she grew up a lot. I also enjoyed reading the fight scene between Matt and Jack-if that makes any sense. Overall a well written story!
I must say I really did enjoy this story. I loved the ending, so happy that everything worked out. I also loved the idea of Simone and Michael being together. I thought that Simone and Sam would've been the ones to get together! I also liked seeing tally grow. I think she grew up a lot. I also enjoyed reading the fight scene between Matt and Jack-if that makes any sense. Overall a well written story!
3/15/2014 c22 AlysonSerenaStone
Hello! Even though you've taken the story down, I'm reading it on my Kindle and thought I'd drop by and give a review on here. I must say I really love Tally and Jack's relationship. I also love Tally; she's probably my favourite main character of yours, but Lara from "The Good Doer" may give her a run. I also love the way you write Jack's pain about the lost of his family and I love that Tally is there to support him. I also like the fight on the footy field for some reason-I guess I just like drama! Great work and I really hope that Tally and Jack don't go their own ways! I can't wait to finish the rest of this!
Hello! Even though you've taken the story down, I'm reading it on my Kindle and thought I'd drop by and give a review on here. I must say I really love Tally and Jack's relationship. I also love Tally; she's probably my favourite main character of yours, but Lara from "The Good Doer" may give her a run. I also love the way you write Jack's pain about the lost of his family and I love that Tally is there to support him. I also like the fight on the footy field for some reason-I guess I just like drama! Great work and I really hope that Tally and Jack don't go their own ways! I can't wait to finish the rest of this!
2/23/2014 c34 chocolategoodness
Wow! I'm so happy for you! You're news gave me such a positive feeling today. I've always loved your stories and I wish you all the best in this endeavor. Cheers all around! :D
Wow! I'm so happy for you! You're news gave me such a positive feeling today. I've always loved your stories and I wish you all the best in this endeavor. Cheers all around! :D
2/22/2014 c20 Guest
I got to the 20thchapter and didn't get to read it all because the Amazon deal. That's too bad...I'll never know what happens unless someone has already spoiled it in the reviews.
I got to the 20thchapter and didn't get to read it all because the Amazon deal. That's too bad...I'll never know what happens unless someone has already spoiled it in the reviews.
1/15/2014 c33 L.R. Skynner
Such a fantastic story! It literally couldn't have been better. I like that you included an epilogue too; not many authors do and it's really a shame. Anyways, great work and good luck in the future :)
Such a fantastic story! It literally couldn't have been better. I like that you included an epilogue too; not many authors do and it's really a shame. Anyways, great work and good luck in the future :)