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12/2/2005 c1 21lordelfy
whoa..that was awesome! just wow!
9/30/2005 c1 175The Random Witness
Whoa! yeah, powerful! you protrayed the situation really well!Raw and sad..~TRW
8/5/2005 c1 16Sha-x-bam
Alright. It was originally designed to be some strange attraction between and older guy and a younger girl, and she was riding in the back seat of a car, and he was driving, and they got in a fight and she's all bummed out...And then the truck comes, and since he'slooking at her in the mirror he doesn't see, and she decides not to tell him because she is too bummed out.

I suppose you can give it your own story, too, but that was my inspiration.
8/5/2005 c1 141Just me.Jessie B
i read this about three times and i still dont completely get it...alright i lied...i dont get it at all...could you give me some insight? good work though

8/5/2005 c1 60I can't believe it's over
aww...it's kind of sad. good but sad :( keep writing

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