for Enveloping Sun9/30/2005 c1 
175The Random Witness
WOW! thought provoking! i really like how you use the term "Enveloping Sun".. i luv UNIQUE terms! (p.s. thnx for the review! it lifted me spirits)(",) ~TRW
175The Random WitnessWOW! thought provoking! i really like how you use the term "Enveloping Sun".. i luv UNIQUE terms! (p.s. thnx for the review! it lifted me spirits)(",) ~TRW
9/5/2005 c1 62Cerii-chan
Nice last line. I love the metaphor you use, it's not clear at first but you understand it at the end. Keep writing!
-Cerii-chan!
62Cerii-chanNice last line. I love the metaphor you use, it's not clear at first but you understand it at the end. Keep writing!
-Cerii-chan!