for Healing Light10/20/2005 c1 
15Melinda Becker
i think this has to be my favorite so far that i've read. i love the hope here that's presented in such a sudden way. and i love that you kept the darkness there, the "graveyards of my memory and past," but as entitities that cant hurt you anymore.completely lovely.
15Melinda Beckeri think this has to be my favorite so far that i've read. i love the hope here that's presented in such a sudden way. and i love that you kept the darkness there, the "graveyards of my memory and past," but as entitities that cant hurt you anymore.completely lovely.
8/12/2005 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
Perfect! If you go on my bio, you'll see a poem. it is the orignal one that inspired my first penname: Flamming Poet Of Insainity! I change my name a lot. Also, you gave me such a laugh when you reviewed to my poem 'shadows'. ya know your name...'light' comes in on the 'shadows' ha ha ha ...tee. Well, again nice descriptions, WRITE ON!(=
119Whisper on the LipsPerfect! If you go on my bio, you'll see a poem. it is the orignal one that inspired my first penname: Flamming Poet Of Insainity! I change my name a lot. Also, you gave me such a laugh when you reviewed to my poem 'shadows'. ya know your name...'light' comes in on the 'shadows' ha ha ha ...tee. Well, again nice descriptions, WRITE ON!(=
8/12/2005 c1 79Sorrowful Dreams
very well written and powerful. reminds me of how I wrote something that was titled off of my penname. great work!
~Sorrow~
79Sorrowful Dreamsvery well written and powerful. reminds me of how I wrote something that was titled off of my penname. great work!
~Sorrow~
8/5/2005 c1 64Tatsu the Blade Star
Heh, this is very, very similar to a poem I wrote called "Saving Light" I just found the similarity interesting. I liked Mine when I wrote it, and I like yours now. Nicely done.
64Tatsu the Blade StarHeh, this is very, very similar to a poem I wrote called "Saving Light" I just found the similarity interesting. I liked Mine when I wrote it, and I like yours now. Nicely done.
8/5/2005 c1 esti
Loved the line : "through the graveyards of my memory" - thought it was a brilliant image. Love Esti
Loved the line : "through the graveyards of my memory" - thought it was a brilliant image. Love Esti
8/5/2005 c1 59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
Awesomeness...well done, this was a great short poem about ur name...u did good^_^
59Sacred-Phoenix-NephthysAwesomeness...well done, this was a great short poem about ur name...u did good^_^
8/5/2005 c1 5mahogany lampshade
I like the theme of this poem... To me it talks about "Hope". Good poem! ^_^
5mahogany lampshadeI like the theme of this poem... To me it talks about "Hope". Good poem! ^_^