
8/8/2005 c1
18lshta
its good...but the last two lines seem wierd to me...but pay no attention to what i say, this is really quite good!

its good...but the last two lines seem wierd to me...but pay no attention to what i say, this is really quite good!
8/6/2005 c1
1UnfortunateFortunate
I'm confused too, verey confused ... O.O ...Oh well! lol this part, 'Fear of darkness/ Though light burns the skin/ Sorrow’s heiress/ Her curse born within.', makes 'her' sound like a vampire! =P Loved it! Evene thought the ending confused me, but that's just me...=) Kudos and cupcakes for you! Hi there... again!

I'm confused too, verey confused ... O.O ...Oh well! lol this part, 'Fear of darkness/ Though light burns the skin/ Sorrow’s heiress/ Her curse born within.', makes 'her' sound like a vampire! =P Loved it! Evene thought the ending confused me, but that's just me...=) Kudos and cupcakes for you! Hi there... again!