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1/26/2006 c1 50Katrina Gabrielle
oo, that's cute! I love the way it ends to, very good.
8/13/2005 c1 2Agent Lionsvalley
Dear Lindsay,

I love the insight into human nature.
8/10/2005 c1 2funny hat
nice job...great symbolism and descriptions! very talented :)

~kim
8/7/2005 c1 2aflyingmachine
mm..i know i'm probably taking it the wrong way, but it made me think of love, and how even though girls get they're hearts 'broken' all the time, they still go back for morenice symbolism in my eyes
8/6/2005 c1 12Chell-o Bodello
Aw, how cute! Lovely imagery and description. And you made it rhyme without it sounding cheesy! Write on!

~ Lunchi

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