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8/23/2005 c28 rebecca
I thought this was an interesting story with a bit too much heavy with dialogue... I like how you characterized Derrya, but Tav seemed very emotional as well, maybe too emotional for a grown man in my opinion.
8/17/2005 c21 3miss-blackhair
gee, very romantic, i'd say.. =)
8/15/2005 c6 me
You need to combine your sentences, they're too fragmented...well i don't know if you did it later in the story...like this..."It is night. I have written my letter"...instead of 2 separate sentences you should combine them. Yea sorry, heh it just kind of bothers me. Not being mean or anything, lol.
8/14/2005 c22 7BangBangYourDead
I love your story. I have to remeber to read it some more.
8/13/2005 c12 3miss-blackhair
whoa.. it seems that you always end the chapp with them kissing.. lol.. =)
8/13/2005 c9 miss-blackhair
whoa.. your story almost flooded my mail.. lol.. its good. the chapps! =)
8/13/2005 c6 miss-blackhair
its pretty short but its kinda neat.. =)
8/9/2005 c3 miss-blackhair
hmm.. very intriguiing
8/7/2005 c1 miss-blackhair
very royally.. hope to hear from you soon! =)

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