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8/14/2005 c1 15liz anya
Very witty and clever.
8/8/2005 c1 235Sasami Kowa
Good job, I like it!
8/8/2005 c1 216ygg
So sad! Very strong and dark emotions.. Impressive work.
8/7/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
So pessimistic! Come now, one must realize that there is an equal amount of both to create a balance in our lives - provides appreciation and perception of worth.

But vivid poem, and I like its grave tone. "parched lips..." Definitely drives that point across.
8/7/2005 c1 152xoxoMizzatxoxo
Funny. Please read and review!

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