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8/17/2005 c1 190Miz E. Mak
That is awesome. So simple, so sweet, so easy to read and understand. You get a million thumbs up for writing a great poem that isn't hard to "get". Write on.
8/11/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very sweet.. love the last line
8/9/2005 c1 80sleah
Friendship is quite the fickle thing... Hello again, I have, myself, have just returned to the realm of fictionpress.com. I'm glad to see that you are still writing...it seems that so many have disappeared...

~Yabou ~SL

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