for The Big Picture10/10/2006 c1 
15ginger delatite
I really love this.I think it is its sheer simplisity that makes it so deep. It's life put into thirteen words but its those thirteen worlds that made me think.Keep it up!
15ginger delatiteI really love this.I think it is its sheer simplisity that makes it so deep. It's life put into thirteen words but its those thirteen worlds that made me think.Keep it up!
12/4/2005 c1 43NinjaStoryteller
Indeed, the big picture. It makes me wonder if this "happy man" had any real character depth. Nonetheless, this is a cool thought to be in haiku form. Not usually something that one would think to write about.
43NinjaStorytellerIndeed, the big picture. It makes me wonder if this "happy man" had any real character depth. Nonetheless, this is a cool thought to be in haiku form. Not usually something that one would think to write about.
9/9/2005 c1 368EWindheim
Not in a traditional form of haiku in which nature is expressed, but the idea of life is. You show it well, but perhaps too simply. It seems to lack imagery. Not a bad beginning though.
368EWindheimNot in a traditional form of haiku in which nature is expressed, but the idea of life is. You show it well, but perhaps too simply. It seems to lack imagery. Not a bad beginning though.
9/2/2005 c1 40Doray
Hi! Thanks for the reviews. Actually, the story "Kernos Duriel" is what I can refer to as my antidote for my occasional pet peeve, which is writers' block. Updating it will serve as a practice for me so that I can make stories that are better. It will never be a masterpiece.
Okay, this poem of yours is short but it means much. The way you presented this fact of life is nice.
~Doray
40DorayHi! Thanks for the reviews. Actually, the story "Kernos Duriel" is what I can refer to as my antidote for my occasional pet peeve, which is writers' block. Updating it will serve as a practice for me so that I can make stories that are better. It will never be a masterpiece.
Okay, this poem of yours is short but it means much. The way you presented this fact of life is nice.
~Doray
8/17/2005 c1 38CarpeDiem28
This poem is so true. I loved it. No a bad haiku, I must say. Keep up the work!
38CarpeDiem28This poem is so true. I loved it. No a bad haiku, I must say. Keep up the work!