for Moon Goddess8/30/2005 c1 
12Learah Kaelar
This is beautifully written, you have such great imagery, I'm jealous! Artemis is my absolute favorite goddess! Thanks for reviewing the 'Wise One'!BLessed Be!
12Learah KaelarThis is beautifully written, you have such great imagery, I'm jealous! Artemis is my absolute favorite goddess! Thanks for reviewing the 'Wise One'!BLessed Be!
8/21/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
i like it. its mystical and has a sort of magic about it at the same time. good job and keep it up!
~davida
i like it. its mystical and has a sort of magic about it at the same time. good job and keep it up!
~davida
8/20/2005 c1 9CerriC
Very nice. Unlike a lot of poetry I've seen about goddesses and mythological creatures, you've kept the original culture's image of her quite well. The last line is so much like a prayer, with just a touch of desperation. Perfect way to end.
9CerriCVery nice. Unlike a lot of poetry I've seen about goddesses and mythological creatures, you've kept the original culture's image of her quite well. The last line is so much like a prayer, with just a touch of desperation. Perfect way to end.
8/19/2005 c1 22Lucid Nonsense
Interesting, I like it. Great descriptions. "Keep a fallen star lit for me" is a beautiful line.
22Lucid NonsenseInteresting, I like it. Great descriptions. "Keep a fallen star lit for me" is a beautiful line.
8/19/2005 c1 2The Depths of Blue
An uplifting prayer to a goddess long forgotten. Simply beautiful and calm. It's peaceful in rythem and lets one sit and think after a rough day. Nice Job,
-The Depths of Blue
2The Depths of BlueAn uplifting prayer to a goddess long forgotten. Simply beautiful and calm. It's peaceful in rythem and lets one sit and think after a rough day. Nice Job,
-The Depths of Blue
8/17/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i like how your poems are so differnt than the norm thats seen like love/angst (aka me) and all. very fun and makes it worth reading unlike commerical crap thats out there these days
3Cry Tears of Darknessi like how your poems are so differnt than the norm thats seen like love/angst (aka me) and all. very fun and makes it worth reading unlike commerical crap thats out there these days
8/17/2005 c1 141AllyCred
i love it...so much passion in ur words...this is a beautiful piece...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~
141AllyCredi love it...so much passion in ur words...this is a beautiful piece...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~
8/17/2005 c1 79Sorrowful Dreams
very well written. love the beginning and the ending. sounds like a prayer in a way.
~Sorrow~
79Sorrowful Dreamsvery well written. love the beginning and the ending. sounds like a prayer in a way.
~Sorrow~
8/16/2005 c1 93Venustas iaceo
Beautiful. It's so simple to me, and yet as all your peices are...still beautiful.
93Venustas iaceoBeautiful. It's so simple to me, and yet as all your peices are...still beautiful.