8/12/2005 c1 110KonekOniko
Beautiful piece, leaves the reader wondering. Very inspiring, hope to see more pieces like this from you soon! ^-^

8/12/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the allusion to artemis... very cool & well done

8/9/2005 c1 1Viola I. West
Very good poem. Artemis is one of my favorite of Greek mythology, although my love for Persephone surpasses her. The imagery here was very well done. Good job.

8/9/2005 c1 337Luthiena o Lorien
This is beautiful- sounds like an ancient prayer.

8/9/2005 c1 63lackluster
something about this makes it so amazing. the word 'goddess' is ringing in my ears.

8/9/2005 c1 73Rozlin
very pretty

8/8/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
beautiful and wonderfullyinspiring. perfect summary. :)

~* noelle

8/8/2005 c1 65Aquafied
beautiful poem, the first two lines dazzled me, such rich description and detail.reminds me of new mexico..lovely, dear, just lovely.