for Want, Take, Have7/10/2012 c27 kelli
your freanch was right on point dont worry
your freanch was right on point dont worry
6/27/2012 c8 Guest
Good
Good
6/18/2012 c30 Allyy Sparkz
you girl, have got one of the best writing styles.. even at that young age. Me and my mates have been spending so much time reading and talking about this, a new and improved and finished version? I CAN'T WAIT IT'LL BE SO AWESOME.. especially since it'll be finished.
I honestly am so excited! Hope you have it up soon, like really, I can't wait!
you are one of the writers that actually gotten me into romance and drama!
:'D
you girl, have got one of the best writing styles.. even at that young age. Me and my mates have been spending so much time reading and talking about this, a new and improved and finished version? I CAN'T WAIT IT'LL BE SO AWESOME.. especially since it'll be finished.
I honestly am so excited! Hope you have it up soon, like really, I can't wait!
you are one of the writers that actually gotten me into romance and drama!
:'D
4/29/2012 c30 PoisonedFlower
Well, you haven't updated this story in quite a while, but I really hope you do someday! This is one of the few stories on this site that I have really liked, despite the little things I didn't love about it. I don't know if you plan to go through with finishing it anytime, but would just like to say that, obviously, plenty of people will read it if you do!
Well, you haven't updated this story in quite a while, but I really hope you do someday! This is one of the few stories on this site that I have really liked, despite the little things I didn't love about it. I don't know if you plan to go through with finishing it anytime, but would just like to say that, obviously, plenty of people will read it if you do!
4/9/2012 c29 
3foreigndelight
Wow.
You really do the hook-you-up-and-never-let-you-leave-until-finishing-the-story thing.
But, there are some mistakes, aren't there? Maybe its wrong to call them mistakes, but maybe holes, or something god damn do not fit or sth.
I woulde very likely to see
-to read sex of sam and davids
-Scott and Madison thing. You left it so unidentified
-the ranger guy appeared? who was he after all?
-Leah is so excluded from the others.
-So, her mother is hating her because she survived? interesting logic she got..
-Ian and the girl. (SOMEwhta starts with ni)nielle, mielle?
-Ians family? who has he got anyway besides Sam and the group? Like he is so alone.
-Scott and the family.
-Scott and Sam. they seem to close but we havent got anything between them, right? we dont have any inf. about him..
-Scott and the other siblings. How are heir relationshiphs are?
and the last shots..
-Ian is dyingy. How very well.
-We got a pregnant lady, as well.
I, personally dont have the problem with not-to-happy endings. And ı am NOT higly obsessive with the happy endings..
well, only a little..
But what really bothers me is that this is NOT like an ending.
well, complaints,complaints,complaints.. You think they never end, Until they transform to COMPLIMENTS.
dude, that was awesome. The main factors. The way the attaraction of Sam and David each other, just make me feel excited. Gotta love them ;)
Especially, my fave chapter was turn me on.
And you have nice touchs to human relationships, different sights of view..
It shouldnt be so hard If you werent created a million character :DD
But, still, loved the way it is. Everybody seemed to attaracted each other with a different way.
Actually, cant say you havent inspired me..
well, see you in your next update...
3foreigndelightWow.
You really do the hook-you-up-and-never-let-you-leave-until-finishing-the-story thing.
But, there are some mistakes, aren't there? Maybe its wrong to call them mistakes, but maybe holes, or something god damn do not fit or sth.
I woulde very likely to see
-to read sex of sam and davids
-Scott and Madison thing. You left it so unidentified
-the ranger guy appeared? who was he after all?
-Leah is so excluded from the others.
-So, her mother is hating her because she survived? interesting logic she got..
-Ian and the girl. (SOMEwhta starts with ni)nielle, mielle?
-Ians family? who has he got anyway besides Sam and the group? Like he is so alone.
-Scott and the family.
-Scott and Sam. they seem to close but we havent got anything between them, right? we dont have any inf. about him..
-Scott and the other siblings. How are heir relationshiphs are?
and the last shots..
-Ian is dyingy. How very well.
-We got a pregnant lady, as well.
I, personally dont have the problem with not-to-happy endings. And ı am NOT higly obsessive with the happy endings..
well, only a little..
But what really bothers me is that this is NOT like an ending.
well, complaints,complaints,complaints.. You think they never end, Until they transform to COMPLIMENTS.
dude, that was awesome. The main factors. The way the attaraction of Sam and David each other, just make me feel excited. Gotta love them ;)
Especially, my fave chapter was turn me on.
And you have nice touchs to human relationships, different sights of view..
It shouldnt be so hard If you werent created a million character :DD
But, still, loved the way it is. Everybody seemed to attaracted each other with a different way.
Actually, cant say you havent inspired me..
well, see you in your next update...
3/3/2012 c1 shann-ng
i came accross this story a few days ago, and i've just finished it.. it's amazing but there was a promise of you finishing it? and its been 3 years! please finish soon. x
i came accross this story a few days ago, and i've just finished it.. it's amazing but there was a promise of you finishing it? and its been 3 years! please finish soon. x
2/20/2012 c1 ljcolic
Hey I just looked at New Year's Eve and the movie character played by Zack Efron reminded me of David (awwww) ... so I went back to read your story again ... it would be great if you continue with it :))))) please
Hey I just looked at New Year's Eve and the movie character played by Zack Efron reminded me of David (awwww) ... so I went back to read your story again ... it would be great if you continue with it :))))) please
12/31/2011 c1 2TwoShoes
This story is really amazing!
i love sam and david, theyre sooo cuteespecially the way they fight. i also love madison and ian and i HATE HATE HATE the way you left it! you cnt just leave it there! please please please finish your editing... or if you wont finish for ages cant you jut edit after the whole storys finished!
i love this:)
Carly:)
2TwoShoesThis story is really amazing!
i love sam and david, theyre sooo cuteespecially the way they fight. i also love madison and ian and i HATE HATE HATE the way you left it! you cnt just leave it there! please please please finish your editing... or if you wont finish for ages cant you jut edit after the whole storys finished!
i love this:)
Carly:)
11/26/2011 c2 1dontletgo
there is a school down my block that my sisters goes too, thats called maple ridge. weird :I
1dontletgothere is a school down my block that my sisters goes too, thats called maple ridge. weird :I
11/5/2011 c30 4asheepiage
OMG Ian's dying! Maddison's pregnant! James is the father right? OMG what a start to a new year... :P On a more non-melodramatic note, i suppose, How's the re-righting going along? Oh and by the way i am in love with this story! Every afternoon i would sit down after homework and read as much as i could :D Great story :) Congrats on the SKoW award (where i found you lol) :) GREATEST STORY EVER!
asheepiage.
4asheepiageOMG Ian's dying! Maddison's pregnant! James is the father right? OMG what a start to a new year... :P On a more non-melodramatic note, i suppose, How's the re-righting going along? Oh and by the way i am in love with this story! Every afternoon i would sit down after homework and read as much as i could :D Great story :) Congrats on the SKoW award (where i found you lol) :) GREATEST STORY EVER!
asheepiage.