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8/25/2005 c1 1rrmehta364
pure whimsical nonsensical joy. Got to love it. Keep on writing more.
8/19/2005 c1 8Cheryl.Dejavu
Haha... the last line really makes the reader laugh. Well.. you'll be able to write even better poems once you start writing more! All the best!
8/11/2005 c1 3MichelLim21
All right boyboy, its a good one, but try to make the last line not have "sense" inside even though it rhymes with nonsense. Thats no style, the style is in fitting the idea into words that ,makes a challenge.But on the whole a good attempt, keep it up!
8/9/2005 c1 2Kalissan
Nice poem! It really is quite funny, and the rhymes actually made sense. I can see that imagination is something you definitely don't lack.
8/9/2005 c1 235Sasami Kowa
Funny, I like it! Great job!
8/9/2005 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
Oh but i get it! LOL! good job! WRITE ON! (=
8/8/2005 c1 3Edwit
That was really random. Really pointless. Really spectacular. Wow, I didn't know random could be so funny. Good work.

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